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    Inactive Member Truth Alexander's Avatar
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    Now that I look back
    I didn't act
    The best, I must confess
    So I come forth with sympathetic eyes
    Cuz I've come forth, to apologize
    I gotta little ahead
    With some of the things I said
    I came on kinda strong
    Mistake 1, that's wrong
    I should've thought things through
    But I didn't know really else want to do
    I'm not making an excuse or 2
    I've just got no clue
    On what to say or do
    24-7 this has been on my mind
    Constantly thinking, cuz I don't wanna lose this time
    I hate to use that term, you're not a game
    More than a pretty face, more than a name
    But quite possibly
    Some where inside of me
    Where the thoughts linger, and the pain stings
    I thought this was the right way to handle all these things
    There is not much else I can really say
    Since I let it all hang out today
    Know this, what I say is true
    I don't wanna pressure you
    Say what you've gotta say
    Do what you've gotta do
    It's your decision, its all up to you

    **Truth 187**

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    great, honest, nice.
    as you said, you laid it out.
    very very honest it seems.... accepting and passing through all the other shit.
    you delt with this, whatever this is, well - in the poem.

    i like.

    ___---parch

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    *nods his head behind parch* I must agree, I do like this one. Good work, some of your better work. What inspired this?

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