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April 16th, 2001, 11:32 PM
#1
Inactive Member
Now that I look back
I didn't act
The best, I must confess
So I come forth with sympathetic eyes
Cuz I've come forth, to apologize
I gotta little ahead
With some of the things I said
I came on kinda strong
Mistake 1, that's wrong
I should've thought things through
But I didn't know really else want to do
I'm not making an excuse or 2
I've just got no clue
On what to say or do
24-7 this has been on my mind
Constantly thinking, cuz I don't wanna lose this time
I hate to use that term, you're not a game
More than a pretty face, more than a name
But quite possibly
Some where inside of me
Where the thoughts linger, and the pain stings
I thought this was the right way to handle all these things
There is not much else I can really say
Since I let it all hang out today
Know this, what I say is true
I don't wanna pressure you
Say what you've gotta say
Do what you've gotta do
It's your decision, its all up to you
**Truth 187**
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April 17th, 2001, 02:40 AM
#2
HB Forum Owner
great, honest, nice.
as you said, you laid it out.
very very honest it seems.... accepting and passing through all the other shit.
you delt with this, whatever this is, well - in the poem.
i like.
___---parch
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April 18th, 2001, 06:12 AM
#3
Senior Hostboard Member
*nods his head behind parch* I must agree, I do like this one. Good work, some of your better work. What inspired this?
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